 
Balletlover - Balletmania
written by Seamless at on 21.05. at 06:52:44 - as answer to: The Game by Dep --Wow--great story there, Depon! Nice transition from Matt being fed up with his frustrating situation to becoming part of an erotic romp in nylon. You've written so much, and so well, that it feels like trying to follow it would not do the story justice. Why not continue with a few more installments on your own? For a co-writing story that goes from person to person, I'm thinking that it would be better with shorter installments. For example in this story, when Matt came downstairs and waited to see the reaction of the girls--stop. The next person would take over from there. Anyway, just my opinion. I could be wrong, and someone might follow up with a juicy installment that does this story justice! ~Seamless~ Answers to this message:
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